Trying to pick up women...

online.

Will this work?

Just wanted to say I find you very attractive. If I got to know you, I would invite you over for a romantic dinner and as soon as you arrived, I would pull you close and whisper in your ear "I have a Tombstone pizza in the freezer with your name on it." Then I would fill your wine glass with Sam’s Choice grape juice.

Thoughts? Recommendations? Better pick-up lines?